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Tuesday, 26 May 2020

what i see

what i see fish a pool of water what i see sand falling to big rocks what i see sand rocks big small rocks what i see a lot of fish a swim of fish. what i see fish eggs baby fish  what I see seaweed

2 comments:

  1. Hi Seth.
    Cool work.
    Next time try and add punctuation.
    Thats all.
    Jacob.

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